Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Driving in the news:

  • Google and their thoughts on safety.
  • AT&T takes a stand.
  • Distractions and driving aren’t the only things that don’t mix.
  • Teens are excited till they hear the stats.
  • Why wait till we’re 21 to drink?

1 comment:

  1. Good round-up. Here are some notes:

    - Whoa! That Google story is huge. If you had summarized it somewhat in your brief, I might have felt inclined to read it. Remember, your news briefs should deliver the most important details upfront. Lure us in with specifics.

    - That being said a lot of your sentences were teasers that didn't give too much of an idea of what I was linking to. "Distractions and driving aren’t the only things that don’t mix" and "Why wait till we’re 21 to drink?" are good. "AT&T takes a stand," and "Teens are excited till they hear the stats," give me no idea what awaits. Lure people by giving them just enough information to understand what the article's about.

    Otherwise, a fine round-up with nice use of bullets and a good graphic.

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