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You have a very expressive voice that's warm and genuine. I think to help open this up, it would have been helpful to provide some visual examples of his B-boy moves to help us "see" him move. Also, it would have been cool perhaps to hear a clip from his competition, maybe of commentators remarking on his work, he music he dances to, or the audience's reaction. I do like that you mention very specific dance influences but some more info on the dancer and his origins would have helped you open up the cultural significance of this individual dancer.